I already like it, the jokes are definately good, but they way everything is presented could be improved. The sound quality of the voices could be better and somehow it is hard to get all the jokes/the story. Maybe it would help if you switch "the camera" to the person who is talking more often or you visualise what the people are talking about so you always know what's going on.
WTF is this? I Don't know but I like the style of this animation. Looks interesting.
It is really hard to read the text, did you take photographs of your drawings or did you just use some really big video effect? I think you could easily improve the quality of this by using a scanner or something
Your art could be better, but its ok. I really like your voiceacting. I also liked the jokes :) All in all this flash simple but I enjoyed it. I also have the impression you had fun making it :D
Dunno, the art is quite decent :D , but I was hoping for more jokes. I get the point (and you made me smile for a little bit) but it took a little too long to get there. We viewers expect to be amused every 10 seconds or so :D
Yes you are right, this need more details, a toad exploding, a mario burning up, a thunder etc. I will improve this video.
Stops before it really starts. Music -> "I got" -> end
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Short but awesome. Looking at the current events I actually wish there was an Obama song :/
I am usually not a fan of those 2 characters fighting each other vids, but I like this one, because it has some humorous elements in it. Also it has a nice ammount of details, like the pillars cracking when shot at.
It needs more emotion!
It is less funny than it could be because the guy is like: "Well yeah Skyrim, totally great game *yawn*"
Make him be more serious, ITS A FKING SKYRIM DLC!!!! :D
i will try for future episodes thanks :)
For me this felt too much like pointless fighting. I am not really into those big fighting scenes. The Intro was hillarious, at first I thought this will be some kind of anime parody. I personally would have preferred more story or comedy.
The animation style was quite good.
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